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Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Winterfresh (This is who I am, an what I am about. If you don't like it, too damn bad!!!) on Thursday, 19-Jul-2007 1:51:58

My pulse beats quickly as she tells me her story
My heart is so crammmed with emotions that it is about to burst in to
Part of me thinks
How could she do this to me?
She promised me she wouldn't make a rash decision
Now, she is crying on the phone with me saying, "What the fuck was I thinking?"
The other part thanks God she didn't get hurt or pregnant
I wish the distance wasn't so far away
I wish I could take her in my arms
And tell her, "It'll be ok No matter what, I'll stand by you."
No matter what
I thank my lucky stars
Over and over and over again
Thank God it wasn't me
Thank God I didn't give my virginity up and get dumped in a matter of hours

Now, I must go
The mixed feelings r conquering me
Like a late night time storm taking over the blue sky
with blackness
I canot take so much
I must sleep
Then, I'll wake up in the morning
And everything will become clear again
Like the dawn after a cold black night

Post 2 by dissonance (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 21-Jul-2007 0:56:29

Very appropriate to the situation. I can understand where you're coming from completely. I like your analogies. And the title.

Post 3 by Winterfresh (This is who I am, an what I am about. If you don't like it, too damn bad!!!) on Friday, 03-Aug-2007 21:59:58

Thanks, Hun since you're the only one who knows what this is about. Lol.

Post 4 by PorkInCider (Wind assisted.) on Saturday, 04-Aug-2007 1:44:31

Sam, I like it, it's deep, it's very expressive, so keep writing.

Post 5 by Winterfresh (This is who I am, an what I am about. If you don't like it, too damn bad!!!) on Saturday, 04-Aug-2007 2:04:21

Thanks, Love.

Post 6 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Monday, 13-Aug-2007 22:06:50

Hey, your a good writer, you know how to capture the moment whether it be happy or sad. Yeah, continue writing. I hope to read more of what your write. Keep up the nice job. Yes, this entry made me think deep.

Post 7 by Arigorn (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 14-Aug-2007 0:49:52

I feel sorry for whoever this idiot is that went and lost her virginity, and I hope this doesn't happen with a 37-year-old, Sam!!

Post 8 by Arigorn (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 14-Aug-2007 0:51:15

And, great writing. Very expressive.

Post 9 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Monday, 11-Feb-2008 22:07:34

Whoa, emotional! Cool!